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Heaviness sinking in.
My slowing breath taking control.
Peace is settling upon me.
The cold concrete
And warm wet blood,
Is all I feel
Against my sallow face.
My energy is constantly
Being drained out of my veins.
My heart is no longer
Pumping precious blood.
No, instead it has resorted,
To the last of my tender momories.
So that I will truely,
Die alone, with nothing left.
My last tear creeps,
Down my forsaken face.
With my last bit of happiness,
It has taken my life.
So short a time,
But agony makes it longer.
At least my murderer
Sent me along after my son.
My happiness, my life, my last tear.
©2008-2009 ~SouLXposed
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hmm... yea. Not sure how exactly this came about... Tell me what you think

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:iconartistically-tragicx:
oh wow. hey are you alright?

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Free Hugs! :hugs:
:iconsoulxposed:
haha, I'm fine, no worries! I don't know where I got this from.. I have no clue. This for once, has nothing to do with my own life. except for the heaviness sinking in, but that was because I was tired.. lol

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I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
:iconartistically-tragicx:
awww okay! -huggle-

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Free Hugs! :hugs:
:iconpankakes91:
:omg:
wow!
this is powerful!
so descriptive!
and such a story!

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I have a story!!!
Vampire Romance if you're interested
[link] thats the link!!

new writing club,
amazing place!!
[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
Check it Out!!
:iconsoulxposed:
Haha! Thanks :blushes:
I'm not exactly sure where I came up with this.. I was just laying in bed about to fall asleep.. and writing came out lol

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I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
:iconpankakes91:
LOL
that happens a lot to me!!!
its like your brain shuts down and opens up just enough....
then BAM!
you get an idea that keeps you up for a long time
lol

and you're welcome! :D

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I have a story!!!
Vampire Romance if you're interested
[link] thats the link!!

new writing club,
amazing place!!
[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
Check it Out!!
:iconsoulxposed:
It actually was very short.. it just came to me.. It grew from the heaviness sinking in, because that's how I felt 'cause I was tired

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I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.
:iconpankakes91:
:hmm:
i know one time i was trying to sleep
and was almost there
then suddenly
i get this idea...
and then came the lemon, which i'm going to post later today if you read them

and you're lucky it was short
most of mine end up being long
and keeping my mind too active to sleep lol

--
I have a story!!!
Vampire Romance if you're interested
[link] thats the link!!

new writing club,
amazing place!!
[link]
ScribeSanturary!!!
Check it Out!!
:iconsoulxposed:
hmmmm... lemon? i'll read it, not exactly sure what it is..

yay, most of my stuff is long when I'm in the middle of a break down.. Haven't written during a break down for a while.... It's funny, I had a not so good relationship with a guy, and now I'm good with him again, and I've lost the inspiration from him lol. it's sad
I actually reallly liked the poems I wrote when thinking about him.. They were a little sad, but I liked them :D lol

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I tear my heart open. I sew myself shut. My weakness is, that I care too much. And my scars remind me, that the past is real. I tear my heart open, just to feel.

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